Hey @sweetoakley,
Thanks for the submission, here's our thoughts on 'NEWS Side Siion'! ๐ฅ
Your track could really benefit from a headset to improve the recording quality! ๐ง
The beat is drowning out your voice, get the vocals cranked waay up so we can hear your bars!
Your rhyming is tight. โจ Great concept. Love the story your bars tell!
Your delivery is super clean, this is sounding good. ๐ถ
Good beat choice, defo adds to the track. ๐ผ
Keep working on your tracks, practise makes perfect! ๐
We enjoyed listening to your music, please share with us again! ๐ช
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team ๐
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Hey @sweetoakley, Thanks for the submission, here's our thoughts on 'NEWS Side Siion'! ๐ฅ Your track could really benefit from a headset to improve the recording quality! ๐ง The beat is drowning out your voice, get the vocals cranked waay up so we can hear your bars! Your rhyming is tight. โจ Great concept. Love the story your bars tell! Your delivery is super clean, this is sounding good. ๐ถ Good beat choice, defo adds to the track. ๐ผ Keep working on your tracks, practise makes perfect! ๐ We enjoyed listening to your music, please share with us again! ๐ช All the best, The Rap Fame Team ๐
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