Hey @sweetoakley,
Thanks for the submission, here's our thoughts on 'NEWS Side Siion'! 💥
Your track could really benefit from a headset to improve the recording quality! 🎧
The beat is drowning out your voice, get the vocals cranked waay up so we can hear your bars!
Your rhyming is tight. ✨ Great concept. Love the story your bars tell!
Your delivery is super clean, this is sounding good. 🎶
Good beat choice, defo adds to the track. 🎼
Keep working on your tracks, practise makes perfect! 👌
We enjoyed listening to your music, please share with us again! 💪
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team 😎
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Hey @sweetoakley, Thanks for the submission, here's our thoughts on 'NEWS Side Siion'! 💥 Your track could really benefit from a headset to improve the recording quality! 🎧 The beat is drowning out your voice, get the vocals cranked waay up so we can hear your bars! Your rhyming is tight. ✨ Great concept. Love the story your bars tell! Your delivery is super clean, this is sounding good. 🎶 Good beat choice, defo adds to the track. 🎼 Keep working on your tracks, practise makes perfect! 👌 We enjoyed listening to your music, please share with us again! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
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