Hey @jonnybones,
We appreciate you sharing 'something gotta change' with us! ๐ฅ
Your rhymes are coming on, keep that up. โจ
Keep flowing on the beat like this, the delivery on this track is smooth. ๐ถ You're a bit off beat at times, try recording, listening back and correcting the parts where you're off!
Good beat choice, defo adds to the track. ๐ผ
This track makes the listener tap into their emotions, well done. ๐
Keep grinding! We can see you got what it takes, just some small tweaks and this track will be total fire. ๐ค
We can't wait to hear your next fire track! ๐ช
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team ๐
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Hey @jonnybones, We appreciate you sharing 'something gotta change' with us! ๐ฅ Your rhymes are coming on, keep that up. โจ Keep flowing on the beat like this, the delivery on this track is smooth. ๐ถ You're a bit off beat at times, try recording, listening back and correcting the parts where you're off! Good beat choice, defo adds to the track. ๐ผ This track makes the listener tap into their emotions, well done. ๐ Keep grinding! We can see you got what it takes, just some small tweaks and this track will be total fire. ๐ค We can't wait to hear your next fire track! ๐ช All the best, The Rap Fame Team ๐
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