Ashton Burke Diss Track by (Daniel Gwin)

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Ashton Burke Diss Track by (Daniel Gwin)

Yo Ashton more like Asston you said you were good at math but looks like you need a bath your always in the restroom to long imaging a guys slong honestly you need to leave the school you baboon looken fool you said you were the smartest in the class but it you should smash your head into glass even though your the oldest you look like a fungus you can only eat certain food to me your one ugly dude that's it i have a life to do im out of here Ashton one last thing you look like a ugly ass deer.

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4 years ago

Yo Ashton more like Asston you said you were good at math but looks like you need a bath your always in the restroom to long imaging a guys slong honestly you need to leave the school you baboon looken fool you said you were the smartest in the class but it you should smash your head into glass even though your the oldest you look like a fungus you can only eat certain food to me your one ugly dude that's it i have a life to do im out of here Ashton one last thing you look like a ugly ass deer.

4 years ago

Hey @exe_d1n0rul3r, Thanks for taking the time and letting us give feedback on 'Ashton Burke Diss Track by (Daniel Gwin)'! 💥 Your bars could use a little flair to help you stand out from your fellow rappers! Think about which words you emphasize and where they fall on the beat to give a good rhythm to the track. You're off beat on this, try and pay a little more attention to when your bars land on the track. This beat is working well for you! 🎼 The recording is good quality, we can hear each element. ✔ Try out a Masterclass if you're looking to hone your rap skills! Keep practicing your craft! Every track you make is going to get a little better! We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

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