What's up @retrolfe,
Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at 'Halloween(prod.Onokey)'! π₯
Okay, we hear the bars! Nice lyrics on this. π
Great delivery, your voice adds rhythm to the track! You're getting really close to having your timing on the beat perfect, you're just a bit off in places. π
Good choice of beat! πΌ
Just a few tweaks and this track is almost there, keep grinding! π€
We hope you send us more tracks in the future, we'd love to see how you take our feedback on board! πͺ
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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What's up @retrolfe, Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at 'Halloween(prod.Onokey)'! π₯ Okay, we hear the bars! Nice lyrics on this. π Great delivery, your voice adds rhythm to the track! You're getting really close to having your timing on the beat perfect, you're just a bit off in places. π Good choice of beat! πΌ Just a few tweaks and this track is almost there, keep grinding! π€ We hope you send us more tracks in the future, we'd love to see how you take our feedback on board! πͺ All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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