Rap Fame A&R

2 years ago

Hey @liljaydee, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for '4'! 💥 Make sure to use headphones to improve the sound of your track. 🎧 There's an issue with the vocals here, try playin' around with the mic positioning as it's not comin' out clear. You're off beat on this, try and pay a little more attention to when your bars land on the track. The recoding quality needs improvement, this will help your track a lot. You might want to try one of our Masterclasses for your next track. They come with ready made lyrics and demos from some of the best rappers on the app. Keep up the hard work, we can't wait to hear your next fire track! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Lil Jay Dee

2 years ago

Hoppin on this track, just like a damn bunny You over here laughing, but I swear it's not funny You swear that I'm broke, but I be getting money My bars is sweet just like honey It's JD and I'm back again Remember how you was talking bout me back then? You over here bullying people for a trend Man, don't call me yo friend This gon end My bars is flowing like a tsunami I would apologize, but sorry not sorry You over here comin up with a story I'm the lab like Dexter's Laboratory You lost like Dory Or Nemo Black and yellow Stop playing before you get hit with my elbow He's a good fellow He wobbling around like jello Baby, HELLO! Baby, how you doing? The bubble gum in yo mouth that you chewing Baby girl, you pursuing Enough talk about that That boy is a rat I'm swinging just like a bat He stepping on him like a mat bruh, "What you doing?!" Tweety Bird, you a puttycat Chorus 444, Lil Uzi Vert Messing around with my homie, he gon put you on a shirt yea, she wanna flirt We got a tryhard alert 4 4 4 4 She want more, Imma give her 4