What's up @danielpurdinkilla,
Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at 'TY JO - Slipped Grip _Prod'! 💥
Your bars are dope, we like how you put 'em all together. 🙌
We think the delivery is fire, keep it up. 🎶 Focus on maintaining that flow throughout, you're just a little off beat a couple of times. 🙏
Great choice of beat, this is pairing very well with your delivery style. 🎼
Any chance you could improve the recording quality, it takes a lot away from your track.
A lil' more work and you're gonna take off, keep pushin'. 🤟
Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! 💪
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team 😎
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What's up @danielpurdinkilla, Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at 'TY JO - Slipped Grip _Prod'! 💥 Your bars are dope, we like how you put 'em all together. 🙌 We think the delivery is fire, keep it up. 🎶 Focus on maintaining that flow throughout, you're just a little off beat a couple of times. 🙏 Great choice of beat, this is pairing very well with your delivery style. 🎼 Any chance you could improve the recording quality, it takes a lot away from your track. A lil' more work and you're gonna take off, keep pushin'. 🤟 Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
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