I'd say if u could memorize every word exactly how u want them sound then believe fully what ur writing and put ur emotions behind ur bars and u will get ur point across more than just having ur words on a beat with the right tempo and flow..... make it sound more real by adding emotions and confidence and u'll be happy with the results.....jus my 2cents tho ... constructive criticism...,. cuz u have alot of potential.....no offense intended.,.
Beat is mad hypnotic..... Flow is def on point... Bars meaningful, but maybe missing some complexity... I guess bars dont gotta be complex, when sending a msg though....
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I'd say if u could memorize every word exactly how u want them sound then believe fully what ur writing and put ur emotions behind ur bars and u will get ur point across more than just having ur words on a beat with the right tempo and flow..... make it sound more real by adding emotions and confidence and u'll be happy with the results.....jus my 2cents tho ... constructive criticism...,. cuz u have alot of potential.....no offense intended.,.
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Beat is mad hypnotic..... Flow is def on point... Bars meaningful, but maybe missing some complexity... I guess bars dont gotta be complex, when sending a msg though.... 1 love
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