Death's Melody

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Death's Melody

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2 years ago

#deathsmelody

3 years ago

Dope!!! Bae where u from Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

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3 years ago

lost since I found this pen that's fire ma 🍻 👏 ✌️ keep on it Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

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4 years ago

Girl got bars 👏🏼💯 keep it up Bars: Great 🎉 Delivery: On point 🎯 Impression: Dope 🔥

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4 years ago

one of my favorites of yours 🔥🔥

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4 years ago

I'd say if u could memorize every word exactly how u want them sound then believe fully what ur writing and put ur emotions behind ur bars and u will get ur point across more than just having ur words on a beat with the right tempo and flow..... make it sound more real by adding emotions and confidence and u'll be happy with the results.....jus my 2cents tho ... constructive criticism...,. cuz u have alot of potential.....no offense intended.,.

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Nice Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

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definitely great lyrics in this so far

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Beat is mad hypnotic..... Flow is def on point... Bars meaningful, but maybe missing some complexity... I guess bars dont gotta be complex, when sending a msg though.... 1 love

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4 years ago

you a rare breed 🔥🚒

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live out their wishes tell I fall mad heaviley sheeish deep ish good ink this dope

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4 years ago

I like the depth it hit some spots for me

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good vibes good flow stay lit stay grinding 💪 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Great 🎉

5 months ago

Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

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2 years ago

KILLED IT 😵 KILLED IT 😵 Keep grinding ✊ WOW ⚡Great job Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

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Yooo 😱 🔥🔥🔥Amazing 💎 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

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I like this for real dope as a mf

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2 years ago

Yo good work fam, you slid on this 💪🏾🫡🔥💥 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

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Cooking Up 🎶 🍲🎶 Something Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

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Can you go show me some love and subscribe to my YouTube YT gang @RJtoshiesty 🔥📀🫡⛽️ Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

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