Hey @khaos843,
We appreciate you sharing 'FREEDOM' with us! 💥
Your vocals are just a bit higher in volume than the beat, try turn them down a bit!
We like the bars, well written!
Nice flow here - delivery is so important. 🎶 Sweet work over that beat. Your timing was almost perfect.
This beat is working well for you! 🎼
This is such a lit track, the beat and the hard hitting bars go so well together! We just need you to fully master that flow as you're a bit off at times! If you get this sorted we know this will take this track to the next level!
With a few changes you can really be a top rapper, just keep learning and progressing. 🤟
We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! 🙌
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team 😎
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@rapfame_ar_team this record was made in 2007!! I appreciate the criticism but I’ve been stepped it up long time ago. After this record
Hey @khaos843, We appreciate you sharing 'FREEDOM' with us! 💥 Your vocals are just a bit higher in volume than the beat, try turn them down a bit! We like the bars, well written! Nice flow here - delivery is so important. 🎶 Sweet work over that beat. Your timing was almost perfect. This beat is working well for you! 🎼 This is such a lit track, the beat and the hard hitting bars go so well together! We just need you to fully master that flow as you're a bit off at times! If you get this sorted we know this will take this track to the next level! With a few changes you can really be a top rapper, just keep learning and progressing. 🤟 We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! 🙌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
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