Hi there @Jdb..,
Here's some feedback on your track 'on_one _1_', thank you for sharing with us! ๐ฅ
Strong bars on this, keep it up! ๐ Tight rhymes, love the structure here. โจ
Great delivery, your voice adds rhythm to the track! This is how beats and lyrics should go together, you've got great timing, well done! ๐
It's like someone made this beat for your bars! Well chosen!
The vocal recording quality is good! Nicely done!
The track is super laid back while still being super narrative and lyrical. The only issue here is you fell off beat just once or twice, but it's nothing major.
We're real impressed with this. ๐ฅ
Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! ๐ช
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team ๐
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good vibes good flow stay lit stay grinding ๐ช Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
๐๐ก๐ข๐ฌ ๐ข๐ฌ ๐ฅ๐จ๐ฐ๐ค๐๐ฒ ๐๐ข๐ซ๐ ๐๐ฌ๐, ๐ค๐๐๐ฉ ๐ญ๐ก๐ข๐ฌ ๐ฎ๐ฉ ๐๐ซ ๐ฒ๐จ๐ฎ ๐ ๐จ๐ญ ๐ ๐๐ฎ๐ญ๐ฎ๐ซ๐ ๐๐ก๐๐๐ ๐จ๐ ๐ฒ๐จ๐ฎ ๐ซถ๐ฏ๐ฅ ๐ก๐ฆ๐ฎ ๐๐ง๐ฒ๐ญ๐ข๐ฆ๐ ๐ ๐จ๐๐ญ ๐โผ๏ธ๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐ ๐๐ ๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐!! #PROTOCHILL
what a Monsta can create from ur love that got it this ๐ฅ & shit no I woulnt steal that from u that bar I mean
Hi there @Jdb.., Here's some feedback on your track 'on_one _1_', thank you for sharing with us! ๐ฅ Strong bars on this, keep it up! ๐ Tight rhymes, love the structure here. โจ Great delivery, your voice adds rhythm to the track! This is how beats and lyrics should go together, you've got great timing, well done! ๐ It's like someone made this beat for your bars! Well chosen! The vocal recording quality is good! Nicely done! The track is super laid back while still being super narrative and lyrical. The only issue here is you fell off beat just once or twice, but it's nothing major. We're real impressed with this. ๐ฅ Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! ๐ช All the best, The Rap Fame Team ๐
NiCe WoRk, please vote on my battle track BeTtEr LyRiCs, the voting ends today. thx 1 love Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
TOO HOT ๐ Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
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Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
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Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Great ๐ Delivery: Great ๐ Impression: Great ๐