Yo @slimetime9,
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Your voice flows nicely over the track. Well delivered!! πΆ Focus on maintaining that flow throughout, you're just a little off beat a couple of times. π
The beat is dope and really works for this track. πΌ
Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up.
We see the potential here, with a few adjustments we can see the room for progression! π€
We enjoyed listening to your music, please share with us again! πͺ
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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Yo @slimetime9, It's time for us to take a look at 'GTFOTW'! π₯ Your voice flows nicely over the track. Well delivered!! πΆ Focus on maintaining that flow throughout, you're just a little off beat a couple of times. π The beat is dope and really works for this track. πΌ Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up. We see the potential here, with a few adjustments we can see the room for progression! π€ We enjoyed listening to your music, please share with us again! πͺ All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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