Na God go punish u...u this trash ass I swear na waste product u be
..be like say bomb dey your head
I will be frank wit u ...your ass needs serious improvement u sound like a lame bish ๐๏ธ olofo.. I was just being nice u don't deserve my like and fuk your opinion idiot
Hey @action.topsall,
Thanks for the submission, here's our thoughts on '#WHY^ENVY'! ๐ฅ
Vocals bit unclear on this one, try recording closer to your mic.
Good rhyme scheme here, keep spitting like this! โจ
Nice flow here - delivery is so important. ๐ถ You're getting really close to having your timing on the beat perfect, you're just a bit off in places. ๐
The beat is fire, nice choice. ๐ผ
Thanks for submitting music for us to listen to, we can't wait to hear what else you got in store!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team ๐
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#Action.TopsAll69 music ๐ถ #DG๐ #CAPE TOWN ENTERTAINMENT
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
Bars: Nice ๐ Delivery: Nice ๐ Impression: Nice ๐
Bars: Great ๐ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Na God go punish u...u this trash ass I swear na waste product u be ..be like say bomb dey your head I will be frank wit u ...your ass needs serious improvement u sound like a lame bish ๐๏ธ olofo.. I was just being nice u don't deserve my like and fuk your opinion idiot
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
๐๐ Delivery: Can improve ๐ Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
๐๐ Bars: Can improve ๐ Delivery: Good ๐ Impression: Good ๐
Good job Bars: Can improve ๐ Delivery: Can improve ๐ Impression: Can improve ๐
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
nice cuzz I like the beat Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Nice ๐ Delivery: On point ๐ฏ Impression: Great ๐
Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
Hey @action.topsall, Thanks for the submission, here's our thoughts on '#WHY^ENVY'! ๐ฅ Vocals bit unclear on this one, try recording closer to your mic. Good rhyme scheme here, keep spitting like this! โจ Nice flow here - delivery is so important. ๐ถ You're getting really close to having your timing on the beat perfect, you're just a bit off in places. ๐ The beat is fire, nice choice. ๐ผ Thanks for submitting music for us to listen to, we can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team ๐