Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hey @jasiahryanjones.6692762, We're gonna review your track 'kaines gay'. Let's get it! Your tracks would be of much greater quality if you use headphones next time. 🎧 We appreciate explicit language is used in rap, but this is a bit excessive. Try ease up a bit. Your flow here needs improvement, try and work on this for your next track. You're getting really close to having your timing on the beat perfect, you're just a bit off in places. 🙏 We think you chose the right beat for this track, suits your style perfectly. 🎼 The recording quality ain't great on this one, can you try find a way to improve it? We really appreciate the time you put into your track. Can't wait to hear what you come up with next! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Jasiah Ryan-Jones

3 years ago

oliver. he thinks hes strong he wears a thong he wanks like this he stink like piss kaine shits in the corner and thinks hes so cool but he went and fucked up the school pool he thinks hes essay but hes actually realy gay when u punch him he squeals like a bitch his shitty shoes are from the Warehouse jizzy. yeayea he be smokin grass a cos he's desperate sayin he would bash us (oliver fuck that bitch) jakson