taken

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09 Jan 2022

yea i be doing my dirt/ baby be lifting her skirt/ smoking the blunt putting the pussy to work/ looking around me nothing but bitches let that fat booty just twerk/ caught shorty looking over like i bet he a jerk/ cool popping a perk/ straight to her place touching the pussy till she come all over my face/ spray it all over just like it was mace/ i know that im nasty but atleast i got taste /shit is a riot gimme the pen and the paper im bout to erase/bet u hard online but wont say shit to my face/ while im smoking this blunt feeling lifted floating to space /most of you dudes be wasting with hate /subliminal discprepancy while i go to the bank/ sippin the finest eating the best/ not giving a fuck what you think /6 years sober so no i dont drink/ but i stay stoned and my eyes do stay type pink /

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2 years ago

Hey @aroc59, We're gonna review your track 'taken'. Let's get it! Your vocals are really clear, that's amazing! 🤙 Think about where your rhymes fall to give a natural flow to the track. Great choice of beat, this is pairing very well with your delivery style. 🎼 Your next track could sound even better with some vocal FX. Why not try our set in the studio? Sometimes it's hard to create a perfect track, keep trying and work on your craft! 👌 We hope you send us more tracks in the future, we'd love to see how you take our feedback on board! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

yea i be doing my dirt/ baby be lifting her skirt/ smoking the blunt putting the pussy to work/ looking around me nothing but bitches let that fat booty just twerk/ caught shorty looking over like i bet he a jerk/ cool popping a perk/ straight to her place touching the pussy till she come all over my face/ spray it all over just like it was mace/ i know that im nasty but atleast i got taste /shit is a riot gimme the pen and the paper im bout to erase/bet u hard online but wont say shit to my face/ while im smoking this blunt feeling lifted floating to space /most of you dudes be wasting with hate /subliminal discprepancy while i go to the bank/ sippin the finest eating the best/ not giving a fuck what you think /6 years sober so no i dont drink/ but i stay stoned and my eyes do stay type pink /

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