the pain is real

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the pain is real

this is the beginning of my story all true first time ever trying to spit so plz go easy on me and I'll continue my story on another beat

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5 years ago

See track description โ†‘

5 years ago

Hey @dannycoleman, We're gonna review your track 'the pain is real'. Let's get it! Get your headphones plugged in if you want to see a big increase in the quality of your track. ๐ŸŽง Your vocals are a little unclear, maybe try recording closer to the mic? Good bars here, defo works here! ๐Ÿ™Œ Love those rhymes, keep that poetry flowin'. โœจ Nice timing, you're perfectly on the beat. ๐ŸŒ  Nicely done, you can feel the emotion on this track. ๐Ÿ’œ This might not be your best track, but keep trying and you'll be there in no time! ๐Ÿ‘Œ We hope to hear more from you! All the best, The Rap Fame Team ๐Ÿ˜Ž

4 years ago

Bars: Perfect ๐Ÿ’ฏ Delivery: Perfect ๐Ÿ’ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐Ÿ’ฏ

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