Hey @masonstimpson,
Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'Shorty_south'! π₯
We like the rhymes in here, good job.β¨
Great delivery, your voice adds rhythm to the track! You're a bit off beat at times, try recording, listening back and correcting the parts where you're off!
Great choice of beat, this is pairing very well with your delivery style. πΌ
Just a few tweaks and this track is almost there, keep grinding! π€
We hope you send us more tracks in the future, we'd love to see how you take our feedback on board! πͺ
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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Hey @masonstimpson, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'Shorty_south'! π₯ We like the rhymes in here, good job.β¨ Great delivery, your voice adds rhythm to the track! You're a bit off beat at times, try recording, listening back and correcting the parts where you're off! Great choice of beat, this is pairing very well with your delivery style. πΌ Just a few tweaks and this track is almost there, keep grinding! π€ We hope you send us more tracks in the future, we'd love to see how you take our feedback on board! πͺ All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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