Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hey @yesycontreras.6695730, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'Edwin the student '! 💥 Your tracks would be of much greater quality if you use headphones next time. 🎧 Make sure your mic is at a good distance while you record, your vocals are a bit unclear on this one. Keep flowing on the beat like this, the delivery on this track is smooth. 🎶 You got potential here, just some parts of the track you're missing the beat. But we know you can do it! 🙏 This beat is working well for you! 🎼 Loved listening to this track, we hope our feedback is useful to you and we are looking forward to hearing what track you release next! 🙌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Edwin the student

3 years ago

Life is hard, Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.