Rap Fame A&R

2 years ago

Hey @skyline3035280, Thanks for the submission, we listened to 'war with the system', here are our thoughts 💥 The beat is a lil' too loud for your vocals, try putting it down to get the balance right. Try cleaning up the vocal recording quality by recording a little closer to the mic! We like the lyrics, they're put together real well. 🙌 Love how you're flowing on this, keep it up. 🎶 Fell off just once or twice but otherwise you rode that beat like a pro! Good choice of beat here! 🎼 Dope work with the effects, nicely done. ⭐ Just a couple small changes and this track would really be a testament to your skills! 🤟 We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Daniel

2 years ago

i said im dip set we at war with the system not to comply or to listin we at war so just keep transmittin I told yall ta keep listinin cause one day we gona make it ta the top and get that hook beat ta drop mic steady we ready bring in da melody sound check lets give it a test earths elements alchemist im a menace mc specialits lyrasysist invested all my life just 4 this even if i have to rock it accapella i could rock it betta then a rockafella gettin so much betta letta for letta neva to leave music behind i stay loyal true and by its side always down for me and by givin me the sole purpose to wana stay here and live a life so i began to goast write otherwise I would wana close my eyes so i could just die with a cold grip on my mic no replys as i sail away to my gangstars paridise with two cents over my eyes just like I was pennywise. so physco twisted down the drain cansastain my brain in a deffintive piture sittin out the frame cant maintain me definitely made for what fame cant tame mc r e c k i put em on check them i put him on display as i make my way up onto the stage to perform above my minimum wage and after that you know this is what