shordy!

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shordy!

nigga so mad he gotta pun face, playin cards i gotta big ace ya! he gets so mad when she fuck me, ya bitches get mad when im occupied saw her last tuesday i thought that bitch died, ya bouta win the race she said i think where tied,

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4 years ago

nigga so mad he gotta pun face, playin cards i gotta big ace ya! he gets so mad when she fuck me, ya bitches get mad when im occupied saw her last tuesday i thought that bitch died, ya bouta win the race she said i think where tied,

4 years ago

Hey @richiemantz, Thanks for taking the time and letting us give feedback on 'shordy!'! 💥 Make sure your mic is at a good distance while you record, your vocals are a bit unclear on this one. Good flow here, it really adds some sauce to your track. 🎶 There's some real nice flows on here, you just fall off the beat a couple times. 🙏 This beat choice is great for you! 🎼 The recording quality could be improved. Try playing around with your mic positioning to improve the quality. There's clearly talent there, keep grindin' and soon you will be a top tier rapper. 🤟 It was great listening to your track, we hope to see a lot more of you in the future, please feel free to share some more tracks with us! 🙌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

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