What's up @lilshtttheads,
Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at 'It’s a Slow Day '! 💥
Your vocals are a little high, could you put 'em down a little bit? Try cleaning up the vocal recording quality by recording a little closer to the mic!
Strong bars on this, keep it up! 🙌 Good rhyme scheme here, keep spitting like this! ✨
This track has a nice rhythm to it. Great flows!
Seriously deep content! Respect for showing your heart! 💙Emotional vibes on this one!
We rate the way you guys go back to back too! Try taking a look at the mix in these transition sections as sometimes the bars get slightly muddled together!
Also try working on the effect levels, including adding/removing reverb/delay/autotune. Perfecting these levels will really level up this tune!📈
Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! 💪
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team 😎
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What's up @lilshtttheads, Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at 'It’s a Slow Day '! 💥 Your vocals are a little high, could you put 'em down a little bit? Try cleaning up the vocal recording quality by recording a little closer to the mic! Strong bars on this, keep it up! 🙌 Good rhyme scheme here, keep spitting like this! ✨ This track has a nice rhythm to it. Great flows! Seriously deep content! Respect for showing your heart! 💙Emotional vibes on this one! We rate the way you guys go back to back too! Try taking a look at the mix in these transition sections as sometimes the bars get slightly muddled together! Also try working on the effect levels, including adding/removing reverb/delay/autotune. Perfecting these levels will really level up this tune!📈 Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
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