Goodbye
You see I'm on a higher conscience, From nothing to something, My energy is pumping, I got these demons running. My soul was out of bounds, Was lost but now I'm found, With darkness lurking round, Had to shine some light in town. The eyes will never lie, I can see through the facade, The real will always rise, Time to leave the fake behind, I'm on a better journey, Throw the snakes out to the wolves, But ever since I changed my life I'm living really good. Look deep within the mind, Stimulate you with these rhymes, I walk with the divine, To the top I steady climb. Don't stop me in my tracks, Get back 'fore I attack, No I cannot relax, Motivated to the max. Will never see me running, I gotta keep it coming, I'm on a higher conscience, So I'm on a higher learning. I'm thankful for my life, I'm thankful for the strife, So as you turn the page, Gotta tell the past goodbye.
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Hey @hyper1, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'Goodbye'! 💥 Your voice is a bit quiet in the mix, bring it up a lil' to get the balance perfect. Improve your flow by listening to your favourite artists and paying attention to the flow patterns they use! We like this beat with your voice! You know how to choose 'em! Good use of effects here, really adds to the track ⭐ You've got the talent, keep grindin' and puttin in the work and who knows what you can achieve! 👌 Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎