Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hey @s.wave, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'first track'! 💥 The vocals are a little unclear, you may wanna try recording closer to the mic to get a better sound. Fell off just once or twice but otherwise you rode that beat like a pro! The recoding quality needs improvement, this will help your track a lot. Why don't you try some autotune or reverb to really enhance your track? There's clearly talent there, keep grindin' and soon you will be a top tier rapper. 🤟 It was great listening to your track, we hope to see a lot more of you in the future, please feel free to share some more tracks with us! 🙌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

🎭🎉S.wave🎉🎭

3 years ago

aye yo its only my first track but im gon' keep it on path aye im out of my breath yea my life is a mess ya aint wanna go with me nah you really think you can compete huh no i aint gon stand a chance nah listen im hold my breath tryna think of the best but i cant get my raps out my head yah its supposed to be empty but just a mess i been running these quick street yea running these real beats ya im looking around im searchin i dont find nobody i can trust yea you think you can fake it just let cut huh yah yo itd only my first track but im gon' keep it on path aye im out of my breathh yea my life is a mess ya aint wanna go with me nah you really think you can compete huh no i aint gon stand a chance nah listen im holding my breath tryna think of the best but i vant get my raps out my head yah its supposed to be empty but its just a mess yah