Hey @askareehenderson!
Thanks for sharing 'One Time' with us! π₯
Your vocals are a little quiet, could you put 'em up a little bit?
We like the lyrics, they're put together real well. π
Your delivery is super clean, this is sounding good. πΆ You're a bit off beat at times, try recording, listening back and correcting the parts where you're off!
The beat is fire, nice choice. πΌ
With a few changes you can really be a top rapper, just keep learning and progressing. π€
We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! π
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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Hey @askareehenderson! Thanks for sharing 'One Time' with us! π₯ Your vocals are a little quiet, could you put 'em up a little bit? We like the lyrics, they're put together real well. π Your delivery is super clean, this is sounding good. πΆ You're a bit off beat at times, try recording, listening back and correcting the parts where you're off! The beat is fire, nice choice. πΌ With a few changes you can really be a top rapper, just keep learning and progressing. π€ We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! π All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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