What's up @y.t.sharley,
Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at 'Y.T.S Harley - fuck shit (Diss to my wife's ex husband) '! π₯
Vocals are hella clear, well done! π€
Your rhymes are coming on, keep that up. β¨
You're a bit off beat at times, try recording, listening back and correcting the parts where you're off!
Good beat choice, defo adds to the track. πΌ
You've got talent for sure, we think this track just needs a few tweaks to really showcase that. π€
We hope to hear more from you!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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@y.t.sharley you deserved more plays than that so I sent it to hot
Here are my scores: Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Great π Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
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Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect π― Delivery: Perfect π― Impression: Perfect π―
What's up @y.t.sharley, Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at 'Y.T.S Harley - fuck shit (Diss to my wife's ex husband) '! π₯ Vocals are hella clear, well done! π€ Your rhymes are coming on, keep that up. β¨ You're a bit off beat at times, try recording, listening back and correcting the parts where you're off! Good beat choice, defo adds to the track. πΌ You've got talent for sure, we think this track just needs a few tweaks to really showcase that. π€ We hope to hear more from you! All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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good shit man
Woah, the heat y'all just produced is next-level π₯΅ Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
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