What's up @colby59landry,
Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at ' Its Dawn___ '! ๐ฅ
We think you could turn the voัals down slightly, just a little loud on this!
Try workin' on flows to help show off your bars. Try listen back to your rap and see if you can get your bars to have better timing with the beat.
We think a great step to take would be to try one of our Masterclasses to help perfect your rapping skillset.
We just wish the recording quality was improved as this is taking away the potential from this track!
We hope you send us some more tracks in the future, we would love to see how you take our feedback on board! ๐ช
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team ๐
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What's up @colby59landry, Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at ' Its Dawn___ '! ๐ฅ We think you could turn the voัals down slightly, just a little loud on this! Try workin' on flows to help show off your bars. Try listen back to your rap and see if you can get your bars to have better timing with the beat. We think a great step to take would be to try one of our Masterclasses to help perfect your rapping skillset. We just wish the recording quality was improved as this is taking away the potential from this track! We hope you send us some more tracks in the future, we would love to see how you take our feedback on board! ๐ช All the best, The Rap Fame Team ๐
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