Hey @aliyay,
Thanks for the submission, here's our thoughts on 'He Wanna Tell Us How He Wanna Die'! 💥
The bars could use a little improvement. Try writin' in different places to get the dome poppin'. Your rhymes are coming on, keep that up. ✨
Your delivery is smooth, great flows here! 🎶
We think you chose the right beat for this track, suits your style perfectly. 🎼
You're a few tweaks away from being very good! Keep putting the work in and you'll get there!
We can't wait to hear what else you got in store!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team 😎
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#He wanna tell us he wanna die
Hey @aliyay, Thanks for the submission, here's our thoughts on 'He Wanna Tell Us How He Wanna Die'! 💥 The bars could use a little improvement. Try writin' in different places to get the dome poppin'. Your rhymes are coming on, keep that up. ✨ Your delivery is smooth, great flows here! 🎶 We think you chose the right beat for this track, suits your style perfectly. 🎼 You're a few tweaks away from being very good! Keep putting the work in and you'll get there! We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
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