Hi @kingdyavol!
Welcome to our feedback of 'Cruise'! ๐ฅ
The vocals are a little unclear. Try experimenting with the mic position to improve that.
Dope delivery, the track flows real nice. ๐ถ Good effort with your timing, you are mostly on the beat here, just watch out at certain points not to lose it. ๐
We think you chose the right beat for this track, suits your style perfectly. ๐ผ
You're a few tweaks away from being very good! Keep putting the work in and you'll get there!
We can't wait to hear what else you got in store!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team ๐
Please check out my music and let me know what you think about it
Bars: 9/10
Delivery: 9/10
Impression: 9/10
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Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ
Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
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Hi @kingdyavol! Welcome to our feedback of 'Cruise'! ๐ฅ The vocals are a little unclear. Try experimenting with the mic position to improve that. Dope delivery, the track flows real nice. ๐ถ Good effort with your timing, you are mostly on the beat here, just watch out at certain points not to lose it. ๐ We think you chose the right beat for this track, suits your style perfectly. ๐ผ You're a few tweaks away from being very good! Keep putting the work in and you'll get there! We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team ๐
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