DBYoungin

haunted house

DBYoungin
haunted house

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18 Dec 2021

just face it scared of the dark shooting Lazerbeamz like im tony Stark im the man cant be number 1 on this beat cause i am the best you too scared to get assassinated now time to die you lie you said you come back for me to chat with me now why you came with me to this haunted house i might possed now leave needs some rest now you want fight i mean i will stab you with knife or beat you with a pipe dont come to my haunted house bye bye now.face it you try to run you can not from me son im like Jason Voorhees dont breathe cause i can hear you an never im going to make you bleed don't come to my haunted house bye bye now.

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3 years ago

Hey @lil_fear4less, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'haunted house'! 💥 Make sure to use headphones to improve the sound of your track. 🎧 The vocals need to come way up, they're getting overpowered by the beat! Great delivery, your voice adds rhythm to the track! We like how the beat sounds with your voice. 🎼 You're a few tweaks away from being very good! Keep putting the work in and you'll get there! We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

3 years ago

just face it scared of the dark shooting Lazerbeamz like im tony Stark im the man cant be number 1 on this beat cause i am the best you too scared to get assassinated now time to die you lie you said you come back for me to chat with me now why you came with me to this haunted house i might possed now leave needs some rest now you want fight i mean i will stab you with knife or beat you with a pipe dont come to my haunted house bye bye now.face it you try to run you can not from me son im like Jason Voorhees dont breathe cause i can hear you an never im going to make you bleed don't come to my haunted house bye bye now.

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