Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Wassup @jessicawheeley, Thank you for sharing 'ps. my Bonnie your Claude' with our community 💥. Here is a little feedback from us: You can clean up the recording quality here by using headphones to minimize feedback! Your rhyming is dope, it sounds real nice. ✨ Your delivery is smooth, great flows here! 🎶 We think you chose the right beat for this track, suits your style perfectly. 🎼 The overall quality is pretty low, try changing some things to improve the recording. Nicely done, you can feel the emotion on this track. 💜 We really appreciate the time you put into your track. Can't wait to hear what you come up with next! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Jessica Wheeley

3 years ago

true story lost my family danm it nearly killed me man I really felt it. seen my kids gettin taken lord I just can't take it felt like my life was over I met this girl I feel in love with but man she fine yea she mine gotta take my time let her know she mine life is cool girl u showed me how a man supposed to feel. and let's be real our future holds or souls so I achived my goal so thank u girl for the love u gave me u forever mine ps. love u kids .forever my Bonnie always your clide yeh