Hey @thibabydavid,
Thanks for the submission, we listened to 'L.G.I.S BabyDavid ', here are our thoughts π₯
Keep flowing on the beat like this, the delivery on this track is smooth. πΆ There's some real nice flows on here, you just fall off the beat a couple times. π
Great beat choice, really works with the track!
Can you improve the quality of your recording somehow? It will really improve the sound of your tracks.
Definitely got them bedroom vibes on this one! π
We think you could do without the pitched down adlibs in the background, they don't add much to the tune & take some attention away from the lead vocal!
We think you could up the audio quality on the vocals here, you have some nice melodies that would come out even better if this was improved!
The hums are a highlight on this one mmmh mmmmh! Really add to the vibe. Lets get it started!
Keep up the hard work, we can't wait to hear your next fire track! πͺ
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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Hey @thibabydavid, Thanks for the submission, we listened to 'L.G.I.S BabyDavid ', here are our thoughts π₯ Keep flowing on the beat like this, the delivery on this track is smooth. πΆ There's some real nice flows on here, you just fall off the beat a couple times. π Great beat choice, really works with the track! Can you improve the quality of your recording somehow? It will really improve the sound of your tracks. Definitely got them bedroom vibes on this one! π We think you could do without the pitched down adlibs in the background, they don't add much to the tune & take some attention away from the lead vocal! We think you could up the audio quality on the vocals here, you have some nice melodies that would come out even better if this was improved! The hums are a highlight on this one mmmh mmmmh! Really add to the vibe. Lets get it started! Keep up the hard work, we can't wait to hear your next fire track! πͺ All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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