Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Yo @dannyryan, It's time for us to take a look at 'Lost For Ever'! 💥 Think about where the words fall in line with the beat and experiment. This will improve your flow. You're not on beat with this one, try practising your timing so you can improve on your tracks. Yess, we are liking this beat with your bars! 🎼 Any chance you could improve the recording quality, it takes a lot away from your track. Maybe give one of the Masterclasses a go, it's great way to help your timing on tracks. Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Danny Ryan

3 years ago

TIME I spend my day's in deep thoughts  I wonder where I went wrong I wonder why I let my life slip away I wonder about how I'm a disappointment  I'm not a good person a friend, father I let people down and it's killing me inside  I changed,but no one noticed  I care more, but no one is there I have lost everything because of time We only have time on this earth  Time for friends and family  Time to spend together  Time to be happy and love Time is slipping away from me Time is running out for me I try everyday to think positive  Some days are hard I'm tired of being a disappointment  I just wish people seen me differently  I just wish someone would want and love me I just wish I could feel happy again  I just wish someone would say these things  I will be here for you I will care for you I want you and I never want you to go Please don't leave  I'm not ready to lose you I need more time with you I know deep inside I won't hear these words  I believe no one will ever want me like that I know I'm limited on time I know my time is running out I just wish I could show someone more of my time. Show how much I care and can Love I would give anything for happiness again Time is short now and getting harder for me Maybe my time is up Maybe it's to late for me Maybe I'm just not able to be loved Maybe I'm just broken inside Maybe there is no hope for me anymore  I'm lost and there is no more time to find me Maybe it's time to leave and stay lost Maybe this will help the people close to me to be happy again. I'm not ready to die Maybe being lost and broken is my thing I just wish I had someone that wanted to be with me and be happy and love me a little more. I just wish 😪 someone would say I don't want you to leave me I need more time with you. But time is running out I love my family and friends  It's time for me to go and be lost forever 💔  I'm broken inside I'm sorry 😞 for everything  Good bye