Hey @mr.1hunnid,
Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'Devils Den'! π₯
Good flow here, it really adds some sauce to your track. πΆ You're getting really close to having your timing on the beat perfect, you're just a bit off in places. π
Good choice of beat here! πΌ
We need to clean up the recording quality here, play around with it and see what you can do!
There's clearly talent there, keep grindin' and soon you will be a top tier rapper. π€
It was great listening to your track, we hope to see a lot more of you in the future, please feel free to share some more tracks with us! π
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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Devils Den // 1st verse skizmo // 2nd verse Hundun (me)
Hey @mr.1hunnid, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'Devils Den'! π₯ Good flow here, it really adds some sauce to your track. πΆ You're getting really close to having your timing on the beat perfect, you're just a bit off in places. π Good choice of beat here! πΌ We need to clean up the recording quality here, play around with it and see what you can do! There's clearly talent there, keep grindin' and soon you will be a top tier rapper. π€ It was great listening to your track, we hope to see a lot more of you in the future, please feel free to share some more tracks with us! π All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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