What's up @jeremiahstatewsepatterson,
Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at 'Trigger (15:28)'! ๐ฅ
Using headphones next time would defo improve the quality of your tracks! ๐ง
Your voice is a bit quiet in the mix, bring it up a lil' to get the balance perfect.
Great timing on the beat, there were only a couple of moments where it slipped.
Your bars sound amazing over this beat. Great choice!! ๐งจ
A lil' more work and you're gonna take off, keep pushin'. ๐ค
Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! ๐ช
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team ๐
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Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
What's up @jeremiahstatewsepatterson, Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at 'Trigger (15:28)'! ๐ฅ Using headphones next time would defo improve the quality of your tracks! ๐ง Your voice is a bit quiet in the mix, bring it up a lil' to get the balance perfect. Great timing on the beat, there were only a couple of moments where it slipped. Your bars sound amazing over this beat. Great choice!! ๐งจ A lil' more work and you're gonna take off, keep pushin'. ๐ค Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! ๐ช All the best, The Rap Fame Team ๐
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Great ๐ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ