Hey @beckyaluoch,
Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'dream hio dream'! π₯
Using headphones will really improve the quality of your track! π§
Nice flow here - delivery is so important. πΆ Focus on maintaining that flow throughout, you're just a little off beat a couple of times. π
The beat is dope and really works for this track. πΌ
Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up.
You got talent, you just need to polish your tracks a bit more! You're almost there!
We can't wait to hear what else you got in store!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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Hey @beckyaluoch, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'dream hio dream'! π₯ Using headphones will really improve the quality of your track! π§ Nice flow here - delivery is so important. πΆ Focus on maintaining that flow throughout, you're just a little off beat a couple of times. π The beat is dope and really works for this track. πΌ Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up. You got talent, you just need to polish your tracks a bit more! You're almost there! We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
Here are my scores: Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Great π Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
Here are my scores: Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Great π Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 8/10 Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Great π
Here are my scores: Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 8/10 Bars: Great π Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Great π
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 8/10 Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Great π
Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
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