I can't live without you

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Yeah Life is tough She broke up with me I don't know what to do with my life no more I cant live without you Take me back I promise i will make it right I miss you so much She broke up with me I don't know what to do with my life no more I cant live without you You left me for someone else Wht did u this Take me back Im suffering from depression I cant take it no more Take me back Please Take me back I promise I will make it right I miss you so much

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B The Rapper

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5 years ago

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Rap Fame A&R

5 years ago

Hi there @lonelee, Here's some feedback on your track 'I can't live without you', thank you for sharing with us! 💥 Using headphones will cut out the feedback and really help the quality. 🎧 Keep flowing on the beat like this, the delivery on this track is smooth. 🎶 Nice timing! You were almost always on the beat. Great beat choice, really works with the track! See if you can clean up the recording quality, it's not helping the track. Really feeling the emotion on this track, hits real hard. 💜 The recording quality needs improvement to really unlock the potential in this track. You've got the talent, keep grindin' and puttin in the work and who knows what you can achieve! 👌 Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Mr.OG Loco. #FreeDaStreetz

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

Linkx

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

Ell OG gamsi

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

B The Rapper

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5 years ago