first song

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yea aye take me away from this earth I dont wanna be here no more aye yuh I just wanna be with my uncle yuh I need him back he was another fauther to me he was the only one i could open up to yuh. I miss him but aye its life you gotta get through it I did it so I know u can also your gonna have people who come and go but aye that's life you gotta life for whoever has died u gotta make them proud of your work yuh aye let's go

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Caydn Landi

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5 years ago

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Rap Fame A&R

5 years ago

Hi there @brian111111222222, Here's some feedback on your track 'first song', thank you for sharing with us! 💥 The beat is drowning out the vocals a little, try turning the vocals up! Your vocals are a little unclear, maybe try recording closer to the mic? We definitely like the beat selection on this one, but its hard to hear your bars shine through! Try improving the recording quality. Try listen back to your rap and see if you can get your bars to have better timing with the beat. Our Masterclasses are a great way to improve your rhythm and flow. Try it out! Loved listening to this track, we hope our feedback is useful to you and we are looking forward to hearing what track you release next! 🙌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

🔥(BBG) NinoSnow 🔥

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

{GB} Dubble A

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

Marx Maan

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

👑 GODFLOW603 👑

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Great 🎉 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥