so pathetic
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•22 Nov 2021
ya little h on the beat it's experienced your just inexperienced and ain't it clear to you I don't need help but you do you are pathetic like a little melt and I'll smack you you have no chance I'll stab you with my rocket lance blood everywhere bleeding out you can't even shout no one is about then you lose all of your clout and you are filled with doubt you think of all the things throughout your career now your injury is quite severe so you need help held inside an endless sleep I took you out with one sweep and now the wound is quite deep your time is over man you ended before you even began your even weaker than I thought I'll just leave you here to rot some will miss you a lot but I will not
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Hey @little_h.4663, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'so pathetic'! 💥 Your tracks would be of much greater quality if you use headphones next time. 🎧 The vocals are a tiny bit too quiet, see if you can put them up a bit! You're voice syncs up to the beat perfectly, nice timing! 🌠 The beat is fire, nice choice. 🎼 Awesome energy in your delivery, nicely done! 🥵 We feel that adding some of our built in audio effects could really help bring this track to life! We see the potential here, with a few adjustments we can see the room for progression! 🤟 We enjoyed listening to your music, please share with us again! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
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