without a shawty

Name: without a shawty
Description: I'm new to this sharing it im using the beat on the app atm my confidence is bit half n half with doing all this honest opinions please but be polite

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I'm new to this sharing it im using the beat on the app atm my confidence is bit half n half with doing all this honest opinions please but be polite

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Rap Fame A&R

4 years ago

Hi there @menacedreams, Here's some feedback on your track 'without a shawty', thank you for sharing with us! 💥 Strong bars on this, keep it up! 🙌 The rhyming is well put together. ✨ The track has meaning. 👍 You got some calm flows on this one! 🇬🇧 You lose the beat a couple times tho so make sure you take a look back and try correct the sections where your flows off! Yess, we are rating this beat with your bars! 🎼 The overall quality is a lil low, try changing some things to improve the recording. Some nice ideas behind this one too! We rate the vibe you're coming through with! A lil' more work and you're gonna take off, keep pushin'. 🤟 Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Mr.atp

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

Josiah the G

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

Lil Joiner2.0

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

Ⲭ𝛼ր𝛛𝗲𝐫

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 8/10 Bars: Great 🎉 Delivery: Great 🎉 Impression: Great 🎉

TMBeatZ

5 years ago

good job like this flow instantly 👏

MenaceDreams

Author

5 years ago

I threw this together

TMBeatZ

5 years ago

I got new battles please comment much respect either way fire lyrics till I die forever only honest votes much respect for giving me a chance 👌 💯 #TmASpielThatICouldntHear #TmChieferTheQueefer hope you enjoy 👌

Jay Villin

2 months ago

Stay lit ⚡ Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

The 1 one

2 months ago

Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

👑Richcloud$(T2S)👑🥷🎙️💯⚡🙌

5 months ago

Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

Mr.nolo (the endgameboss)

7 months ago

Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥