his story

Name: his story
Description: Just wanted someone to show me the way. Obviously you were never there as a father. Who or what should I call you

0:00

Just wanted someone to show me the way. Obviously you were never there as a father. Who or what should I call you

13 Comments

Leave a comment

Aaron Mnyamane

Author

5 years ago

Just wanted someone to show me the way. Obviously you were never there as a father. Who or what should I call you

Bo Jangles

4 years ago

Please check out my music and let me know what you think about it Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

Rap Fame A&R

5 years ago

Hey @blaxtarsneeh, We appreciate you sharing 'his story' with us! 💥 Get your headphones plugged in if you want to see a big increase in the quality of your track. 🎧 Think about how you want to deliver your bars, and try new flows to show your talent. Great choice of beat, this is pairing very well with your delivery style. 🎼 Awesome energy in your delivery, nicely done! 🥵 Just a few tweaks and this track is almost there, keep grinding! 🤟 We hope you send us more tracks in the future, we'd love to see how you take our feedback on board! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Aaron Mnyamane

Author

5 years ago

I appreciate the love, thank you very much hoping to do more on the next..

👑MrEmanuel myseteri 🏆🌈

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 8/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Great 🎉 Impression: Great 🎉

👑 GODFLOW603 👑

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

Garry Teague

5 years ago