Hey @willardfritcher,
Thanks for the submission, here's our thoughts on 'Rammstein remix DRSLF'! 💥
A great rhyme scheme takes work. Try rewording and playing around with the speed of delivery to improve the structure. We appreciate the idea behind this track, nicely done. 👍
Think about how you want to deliver your bars, and try new flows to show your talent.
The beat is dope and really works for this track. 🎼
We can see your potential, just put a bit more time into your next track! 👌
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team 😎
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Yo diz dope fam🔥🔥💯🦾
Hey @willardfritcher, Thanks for the submission, here's our thoughts on 'Rammstein remix DRSLF'! 💥 A great rhyme scheme takes work. Try rewording and playing around with the speed of delivery to improve the structure. We appreciate the idea behind this track, nicely done. 👍 Think about how you want to deliver your bars, and try new flows to show your talent. The beat is dope and really works for this track. 🎼 We can see your potential, just put a bit more time into your next track! 👌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
my voice may be overpowering the track but at least you can here me. found a way to here my voice..plus 1