Lesson's
live n learn, get n line, wait ur turn, leave me out the comments, dont think you the first, yet no one around, I was down bad n fucked up, Only a few came on through, still plenty left Speakin' outta turn, thruth the true ones loyal keepn up, hear it for real ,shout out to my boyz , We just out here run N it up, Out doing it better, Whippin' the Benz, doing donuts ,whats the next concept, God-sent Least that's what my mom says, Proof is in the progress, Out doing in the process, Always busy that's whats nonsense, barkin' up the wrong tree, Haven't fallen off yet, yee Come on up with a classic, years later n say it's a sleeper, that shit petty fo real, might charge my ex in the future, She came for me twice, you know I'm a tease n please her for the night,42 millimeter, I probably should go on n leave her, I need me some Jesus, But soon as I confessin, he wouldn't let me go on without a blessing, I got sins on my mind, A lot of M's on my mind I keep my friends on my mind, I'm in love with two girls at one time ,that's why I got ten on my mind got a lot of M's on my mind , I keep my friends on my mind, I need me some Jesus in my life, Amen I love me a threesome at one time ,she my lil' secret, No tryna diss me one time,we just go at your people fir the night, you can go on n keep it, dig it had to fix it, you swim with the lil' fishes she claims she misses it, so I fit the description, Fina give her this d, imma go all in, I get the prescription, bands in our britches, you know I ain't missin', you know I'm just chillin',But I'll send a hit while I chill with my children, the bigger the office I fucked 'round and found me a swag, they makin' me offers, Yet I don't even bargain, I'll start from the bottom, Woke up the followin' day n went harder, they see that I'm smarter, I love to get charter, I gave her four perks, n she even let me fuck her daughter. couldnt let 'em down mean while I know I be on some shit that they ain't thought of ,got sins on my mind , got a lot of M's on my mind, I keep my friends on my mind, I'm in love with two girls at one time, That's why I got ten on my mind got a lot of M's on my mind yeah, I keep my friends on my mind, Should repent, I need me some Jesus in my life Amen.
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Hi @coreywhitty! Welcome to our feedback of 'Lesson's'! π₯ Your vocals are a lil' unclear, try playing around with your mic position to get the best take. Turn down the beat a lil' bit it's drowning out your vocals. Good beat choice, defo adds to the track. πΌ See if you can clean up the recording quality, it's not helping the track. We like the lyrics, it's just unfortunate that the recording hasn't come out that well. Fix the recording quality and we can fully assess the track! Put a bit more into your next track, we can see your talent! π All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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