Hey @quantvo,
Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'She_Bad'! 💥
This is some dope storytelling rap, you painted a picture here. You can feel the emotion in this one, this is real rap, keep telling your story, we are sure many can relate to this track.
Lovin' the vocal level, it's the perfect volume over the beat so we can hear both. ✅
Tight rhymes, love the structure here. Like the little scheme "She was fine ... lov is blind , on my mind" - this was a cool lil switch up.✨
Nice timing! Never left the beat once! Also, great choice of beat, this is pairing very well with your delivery style. 🎼
Just a few tweaks and this track is almost there, keep grinding! 🤟
We hope you send us more tracks in the future, we'd love to see how you take our feedback on board! 💪
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team 😎
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Hey @quantvo, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'She_Bad'! 💥 This is some dope storytelling rap, you painted a picture here. You can feel the emotion in this one, this is real rap, keep telling your story, we are sure many can relate to this track. Lovin' the vocal level, it's the perfect volume over the beat so we can hear both. ✅ Tight rhymes, love the structure here. Like the little scheme "She was fine ... lov is blind , on my mind" - this was a cool lil switch up.✨ Nice timing! Never left the beat once! Also, great choice of beat, this is pairing very well with your delivery style. 🎼 Just a few tweaks and this track is almost there, keep grinding! 🤟 We hope you send us more tracks in the future, we'd love to see how you take our feedback on board! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
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