wasn't I your true love
Micaela Christenson12 Plays
•12 Nov 2021
all the tears that I've shed from the words that you have said got me feelin our relationships dying maybe it's already dead I fear the worst you no longer put my needs first everything you once did to show me you loved me now are memories that have been cursed I feel broken heart open eyes shut I feel the pain like a knife it will cut I have cried begged pleaded telling you exactly what I needed but your not there your gone I'm alone stealing every bit of happiness that I've known I try to see past the pain even when your the one to blame I still love you can't loose you please stay why you want to make me go insane wasn't I your happiness you true love since when did I become someone you don't think of you keep tellin me you love me but I don't feel it oh God please send me a sign from above I feel broken heart open eyes shut I feel the pain like a knife it will cut I have cried begged and pleaded just tell me if you have actually cheated cause your not here your gone I'm still alone killing any little bit of happiness that I have known
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thank you, that was my first time ever recording so I was a little quiet, but im gonna make a take two
Hey @micaelachristenson, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'wasn't I your true love'! 💥 Your vocals are real quiet, could you put 'em up? The vocals are a little unclear. Try experimenting with the mic position to improve that. We like this beat with your voice! You know how to choose 'em! Why don't you try some autotune or reverb to really enhance your track? We can see your potential, just put a bit more time into your next track! 👌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
all the tears that I've shed from the words that you have said got me feelin our relationships dying maybe it's already dead I fear the worst you no longer put my needs first everything you once did to show me you loved me now are memories that have been cursed I feel broken heart open eyes shut I feel the pain like a knife it will cut I have cried begged pleaded telling you exactly what I needed but your not there your gone I'm alone stealing every bit of happiness that I've known I try to see past the pain even when your the one to blame I still love you can't loose you please stay why you want to make me go insane wasn't I your happiness you true love since when did I become someone you don't think of you keep tellin me you love me but I don't feel it oh God please send me a sign from above I feel broken heart open eyes shut I feel the pain like a knife it will cut I have cried begged and pleaded just tell me if you have actually cheated cause your not here your gone I'm still alone killing any little bit of happiness that I have known
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