Hey @rian_d,
Thanks for the submission, here's our thoughts on 'shine'! π₯
Your tracks would be of much greater quality if you use headphones next time. π§
We think the delivery is fire, keep it up. πΆ Focus on maintaining that flow throughout, you're just a little off beat a couple of times. π
Great beat choice, really works with the track!
The overall quality is pretty low, try changing some things to improve the recording.
We feel that adding some of our built in audio effects could really help bring this track to life!
Just a few little things this track will be there, you got it! πͺ
It was dope listening to your music, share with us again for feedback! πͺ
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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Hey @rian_d, Thanks for the submission, here's our thoughts on 'shine'! π₯ Your tracks would be of much greater quality if you use headphones next time. π§ We think the delivery is fire, keep it up. πΆ Focus on maintaining that flow throughout, you're just a little off beat a couple of times. π Great beat choice, really works with the track! The overall quality is pretty low, try changing some things to improve the recording. We feel that adding some of our built in audio effects could really help bring this track to life! Just a few little things this track will be there, you got it! πͺ It was dope listening to your music, share with us again for feedback! πͺ All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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