Hey @swisherdaflipper,
Thanks for taking the time and letting us give feedback on 'DripyJava- (I'ma be ok) ft. Swisher da flipper'! 💥
The beat is slightly overpowering, turn up your vocals for a better mix.
You got potential here, just some parts of the track you're missing the beat. But we know you can do it! 🙏
The beat is fire, nice choice. 🎼
You're using effects in the right way! Gives your track a lil' something extra!
Great effort on this track! This track could really benefit from a few flow switch ups between verses. Also, your bars need a bit of work. Keep practicing on writing lyrics to really showcase your talent. Try to draw from personal experience when writing lyrics.
You got talent, you just need to polish your tracks a bit more! You're almost there!
We can't wait to hear what else you got in store!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team 😎
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Hey @swisherdaflipper, Thanks for taking the time and letting us give feedback on 'DripyJava- (I'ma be ok) ft. Swisher da flipper'! 💥 The beat is slightly overpowering, turn up your vocals for a better mix. You got potential here, just some parts of the track you're missing the beat. But we know you can do it! 🙏 The beat is fire, nice choice. 🎼 You're using effects in the right way! Gives your track a lil' something extra! Great effort on this track! This track could really benefit from a few flow switch ups between verses. Also, your bars need a bit of work. Keep practicing on writing lyrics to really showcase your talent. Try to draw from personal experience when writing lyrics. You got talent, you just need to polish your tracks a bit more! You're almost there! We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
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