Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hi there @stylesgates, Here's some feedback on your track 'HOME OF DEE BRAVE', thank you for sharing with us! 💥 Your track could really benefit from a headset to improve the recording quality! 🎧 You've thought about what you're trying to say in this track and it shows, nicely done. 👍 Your bars are on the beat every time! You just don't miss! Good beat choice, defo adds to the track. 🎼 We see the potential here, with a few adjustments we can see the room for progression! 🤟 We enjoyed listening to your music, please share with us again! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

solomon gates

3 years ago

dis iz dat ohhhhh yeaa eee yeaaahhh verse 1 ) its d home...home of d brave ya better behave wen u step in dz place im steppn outa da shade yo no we never slave gana fight to da grave sayn ur here to save ma ppl from starvationnnnnnnnop locked my ppl away and started destruction and try to make us slaves well u gta get up get up and get out wit ur tricks d way u came here you make ur way out on ur ships pushed back too no mans land once by da sea now outa reach from my hand hidden in da mist is da children but this there home da hills and da trees yes this is there land CHORUS ) this d home.. home of the bravest we wear our tats on our face yes this is my race d greatest x1 verse 2 ) till dis day we still fight for the rights of this land that we owned it they keep sliming there way like a snake yeahh dey slithering... i got power wen im on d mike yes so im gana hold it if you feel how i feel take a breathe and sing wit me chorus ) this is d home..home of d bravest we wear our tats on our face yes this is my race we da greatest x1 one great man..can be greater plenty hands come to geda and one mans voice can be heard.. but plenty of people can make make d earth quake rise up rise together as one ( rise x5 ) rise and be seen like d son