I've Seen Heaven & Hell & Lived To Tell The Tale
I've seen heaven and hell & lived to tell the the tale lived half my life chasing tail beautiful girl , nother spell another lie only time will tell pretty smile pile of shit mind ain't my kind I'm into more than ass behind me I'm always tryin to find me a stars aligned divine designed fine one I can call mine I've seen heaven and hell & lived to tell the tale I've seen betrayal I have been failed I've been jailed I've been bailed I've sailed the seas beat disease ate the finest cheese got my keys been a tease been inside the finest knees yet it ain't you I'm here to appease if you please I came to knock this on off the tee like Jack rapping like Mac dunkin like Shaq hit you like a Mac truck fresh as a new stack ought not thought I wouldn't come for the spot I came to buy the lot shit get me a yacht consider me taught I've fought and fought I'm gonna tie the knot get hot stay hot that's the plot don't get shot don't get caught with the pot naw ought not I come to far to come this far I've come to raise the bar I'm gonna go far wish upon my luckiest star I've seen heaven and hell and lived to tell the tail don't spend your life behind a rail let me show you the holy grail it's on down a trail of sin but don't quit you'll win a Saint is a sinner who never quit trying so don't stop buying what you selling what you expelling out of you you are spelling it out for you be about what you spelling out get that doubt out it ain't what we about we gonna make even if we gotta fake it we gonna make it I'm gonna wake up Rake My cake up bake up break up with the old me take the stakes up down my mistakes in the lakes cut ties with the flakes make a few new wakes of positive vibes to make new heights new invites see some new sights catch a few flights breath the sea a few nights get the new vibe right tight bright delight shining like a light I've seen heaven and hell and lived to tell the tale it's been a whale of a story I'll see you at satori in all your glory I've seen heaven and hell and lived to tell the tale
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Hi @ghostedhosted! Welcome to our feedback of 'I've Seen Heaven & Hell & Lived To Tell The Tale '! 💥 You got bars! Lyrics are on point, we like 'em a lot. 🙌 Love the delivery. The way you've pitched your voice is really unique, almost slight Talking Heads style to it but with a hip-hop twist. The world is full of similar sounds so those little tweaks you can make to sound different are absolutely worth experimenting with! The beat works really well with your voice too! Make sure your distance from the mic is relative to how loud your voice is. I'd dip away from the mic slightly in the louder bits and lean in slightly on the quieter bits. Practice this and you'll improve the recording quality on your next track. Really like how you've mixed the flows and dropped out of the almost singing style with your voice to hit some quicker flows before dropping back in. It works! Just a few little things and this track will be there, you got it! 💪 It was dope listening to your music, share with us again for feedback! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
Here are my scores: Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 8/10 Bars: Great 🎉 Delivery: Great 🎉 Impression: Great 🎉
Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯
Here are my scores: Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 7/10 Bars: Great 🎉 Delivery: Great 🎉 Impression: On point 🎯
Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯
Here are my scores: Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 8/10 Bars: Great 🎉 Delivery: Great 🎉 Impression: Great 🎉
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Great 🎉 Impression: Dope 🔥
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Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯
Bro, you crushed it! Delivering heat as always! 🔥 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥