thanks much love I appreciate the critique duly well noted delivery vocals and a few tweaks, just keep in mind I didn't write this song this was a freestyle off the top so all I did was add ad libs and add the sound effects so thanks I appreciate it
Hey @lawtha,
Thanks for the submission, we listened to 'where_do_I_go_from_here', here are our thoughts ๐ฅ
Your vocals are a little quiet, could you put 'em up a little bit?
Work on improving how you deliver your bars and different flows to your tracks.
Good choice of beat here! ๐ผ
This track is so chill, when I turned it on my chair started reclinin'. Laaaaiiid back
You've got talent for sure, we think this track just needs a few tweaks to really showcase that. ๐ค
We hope to hear more from you!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team ๐
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thanks much love I appreciate the critique duly well noted delivery vocals and a few tweaks, just keep in mind I didn't write this song this was a freestyle off the top so all I did was add ad libs and add the sound effects so thanks I appreciate it
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
Here are my scores: Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Great ๐ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Here are my scores: Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 8/10 Bars: Great ๐ Delivery: Great ๐ Impression: Great ๐
fiyaaaaaaaaaa this go hard asf Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
Here are my scores: Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 8/10 Bars: Great ๐ Delivery: Great ๐ Impression: Great ๐
Here are my scores: Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Great ๐ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Hey @lawtha, Thanks for the submission, we listened to 'where_do_I_go_from_here', here are our thoughts ๐ฅ Your vocals are a little quiet, could you put 'em up a little bit? Work on improving how you deliver your bars and different flows to your tracks. Good choice of beat here! ๐ผ This track is so chill, when I turned it on my chair started reclinin'. Laaaaiiid back You've got talent for sure, we think this track just needs a few tweaks to really showcase that. ๐ค We hope to hear more from you! All the best, The Rap Fame Team ๐
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ