Hi @briancalebinman!

Welcome to our feedback of '2021_10_30_04_29_14'! 💥

A great rhyme scheme takes work. Try rewording and playing around with the speed of delivery to improve the structure. 
Improve your flow by listening to your favourite artists and paying attention to the flow patterns they use! 
Good choice of beat here! 🎼 
Good recording quality here, well done. ✔ 

We can see your potential, just put a bit more time into your next track! 👌

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