Yo @biglondonofficial,
It's time for us to take a look at 'big ben'! 💥
The vocals are a tiny bit too quiet, see if you can put them up a bit!
Your rhyme scheme here is a bit off, try adding some more structure.
Think about where your rhymes fall to give a natural flow to the track.
Great beat choice, really works with the track!
Keep making small improvements and you'll get there in no time! 👌
We can't wait to hear what else you got in store!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team 😎
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Yo @biglondonofficial, It's time for us to take a look at 'big ben'! 💥 The vocals are a tiny bit too quiet, see if you can put them up a bit! Your rhyme scheme here is a bit off, try adding some more structure. Think about where your rhymes fall to give a natural flow to the track. Great beat choice, really works with the track! Keep making small improvements and you'll get there in no time! 👌 We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
Respect the effort young G
Yessir
Big Ben🔥