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ohh my god(prod by llshort)

ohh my god(prod by llshort)

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29 Oct 2021

ayohh i am jealous kinda need ya i kinda lay uu down its all time to kill uu we order throw uu down throwing up flowing up killin"south all the loud all bitcxhezz stored off we beated mask off i am killin"loud now,with the bullet trick sent the money,mola look for honey..cold of kinda of bitchezz layed of now i am Killin'beats doin"heats flowin"lits..ohh my god u hit me all along..bitxches on my throat bigger on my pot..pussy leaked of..suck my dick puck my pick pac man do the shiit..ohh my goD lick so hard no my love thats so fucked keep it law on ur eyes on ur face,look it back pack the bags go in law proposal ohh my god ohhh my lord theyy all trying to keep me up banding em"pullin"up ohh my gosh,the bad bitchezz has all arrived playin"all aloud pickin"GuNs shooTin"puNS nothin'seems found on the guns no bullets,all to lets all f**cked up

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Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

3 years ago

Wassup @llshort23, Thank you for sharing 'ohh my god(prod by llshort)' with our community 💥. Here is a little feedback from us: Your tracks would be of much greater quality if you use headphones next time. 🎧 The bars could use a little improvement. Try writin' in different places to get the dome poppin'. Good flow here, it really adds some sauce to your track. 🎶 Great choice of beat, this is pairing very well with your delivery style. 🎼 The bars aren't the most original, that area can definitely be improved. We can see your potential, just put a bit more time into your next track! 👌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

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